Assessment 1

Assignment 1 Reflection

I was extremely pleased that my tutor found my work ‘exploratory, loose (I think) and questioning. This positive opening feedback was very welcome having undertaking, what was for me, out of the ordinary exercises and studying at a level which is a new and uncertain thing for me.

At the same time the tutor informed me of the things I ought to be doing at this level; such as colour coding, annotating images, using human profile figures to provide scale in models, all of which I can now see would benefit and enhance my work.

My tutor provided me with some research around a question I raised – ‘why did so many take to the right’. A question I asked myself about the direction people took through a gallery. I left this question open without trying to find an answer – something which I have been informed I should do. I read the research and again realised how much my learning can be improved by undertaking such a task. It allowed me to explore the question further and provided reason’s, in this case why people behave in a certain way and which provided me with a possible answer to the behaviour I witnessed.

For exercise 1:5 I was to visualise the space and experience through one sketch. I chose to complete this in monochrome, which my tutor felt was a poor choice, loosing some of the richness and visual contrast which had been provided in other examples. I think I may have felt this was the right thing to do because the examples shown in the course work are in monochrome. I probably thought monochrome would be a little more sophisticated and I was possibly a little concerned that adding colour would have created something a little too childlike. The feedback allowed me to see that I should not think in these ways, to push myself, not to worry and to experiment.

Although some feedback around my assessment piece was positive I am disappointed in myself that I did not continue with the first attempt at this piece or at least continue with a dual aspect piece which I originally intended. The tutor was dissatisfied that I did not continue with adding angles in this piece, angles which I had referred to throughout the exercises. My first attempt for this assessment piece was a tall diagonal wall like structure with a dangling ball of ‘fuzz’ to represent an audio hum. The ball had shapes and different materials sticking out from the fuzz to represent the different sounds which interjected through the hum. I however could not get the wall to stand tall enough at an angle to also hold the ball. Further to this I was unsure if the ball of sound was convincing enough, thus I ended up with the box of sound waves and representation of irregular noises. Having now had the feedback about this piece I feel I copped out and should have stuck to including angles as I had intended, in some form or other. I have no doubt this feedback will make me more persistent in future activities – to continue to portray the visual elements which affected me the most.

My tutor commented that I could be more balanced with observations concerning physical elements, materials and spatial layout in terms of function and how these contribute to the feelings you experience. Begin to draw in the views of others from research to develop your thinking. The last comment again is about looking for research and information around the subject, which I aim to do. I however felt I had observed the elements he mentioned so will ask my tutor to expand on this for me, so I can understand where my observations have lacked and what text he can recommend for me to research further.

The tutor commented that a gallery is perhaps not the richest of interior spaces architecturally, given that its design is as a bare canvas for other work. I fully appreciate this and initially did not think I would choose the gallery to complete this exercise but once I was there I was taken in by it’s height, space and those angles! Having a glimpse at further exercises I can see that this space may not provide me with such a productive subject?

Overall I was pleased with the feedback I received which was both positive and instructive. I am glad of the instruction and guidance received to help direct and push me on.

Work after feedback from my tutor


As mentioned above I felt frustrated with myself that I did not produce a model with angles, reflecting how I felt about the power of the angles in the Nottingham Contemporary. Therefore I decided to create another piece and, as suggested, add a human profile for scale.

This piece has many angles. I have tried with this piece to portray the varying shapes of the galleries in the Nottingham Contemporary and the angled walls ability to pull you in. Although there were no steps in the gallery I added these symbolically to represent the changing heights in the gallery but also that you are being lead/pulled into spaces, the way steps lead you to another level. I also aimed to illustrate the changing quality of light in the galleries by have some parts of the model open, others covered and gaps where it is possible to see in and out, as I was able to see in and out of the gallery window or through some of the gallery doors.

The folded paper represents the hum which could be heard in gallery 1 – and the greater tension I felt when I spent time in this gallery.

Photographs taken in the sunlight

Exercise 2.5 Visualising Atmosphere through sketch models

My sketches often portrayed the shapes, lines and height changes within the galleries. I tried to represent this is in model 1, although perhaps I little too representational?

I wanted a way of illustrating the tension the angled walls and sharp corners provided and how these corners drew me in.

The changing light throughout the galleries had a big effect on how I felt about the spaces and the different atmospheres it created. I wanted to represent the different amount of light that was let into the galleries, using the shadows created to help depict atmosphere.


Exercise 2:4 Material

For this exercise I must refer back to exercise 2:2. In exercise 2:2 I discussed materials quite fully as I did not feel it was possible to discuss touch and emotion without mentioning materials. I believe the materials used played a large part in how I felt about the spaces I observed, the emotions they generated in me and the atmosphere created.

There is however one material I can explore further here, which played an important part within the spaces observed, which is glass. Although I have mentioned the use of glass for display cabinets I did not discuss it’s use in the large doors which lead into Galleries 1, 2, & 3 and the huge panes of glass which make up the window in gallery 4.

The glass doors allow light to travel into the galleries and when this is not wanted they are covered over as was done in gallery 2. Being able to first peer through the doors and get sight of what is inside can work to entice some in and for others they might not like what they see and decide it’s not for them. Covering the glass could also be enticing, curious to know what is behind the glass and intrigued to go inside. Again for others this can be off putting. At first instance I thought gallery 2 was closed as it appeared in darkness, it was not until I read a notice close to the door that I knew the public were welcome to go in. For the less curious or concerned this covering over of the glass could be a barrier to walking through and experiencing what is inside.

For me the best use of glass was the huge window. It played a large part in creating the feeling of openness, freedom and space to breath in gallery 4. The seats at this window provided viewers a place to sit and enjoy an expansive view of the gallery but it also permitted viewers to look out and get a view of the city where old and new buildings can be viewed, trams fly past and the weekday cross is in direct vision. The glass provides an element of protection, viewers can sit for a time and watch the world go by. Behind the glass and within the gallery this does not appear strange or out of place, sit at the other side of the glass outside on the pavement and this could be viewed quite differently by passers by.

The large glass pains also put the gallery on display, another way of showing people what is being exhibited and stating ‘come in’ ‘you are welcome’ ‘you are accepted’. It portrays an element of friendless. There will always be times when it’s an individuals first time entering a gallery, some may feel it is not for them, that they do not fit or they will not understand what is inside? The large glass window aims to elevate these apprehensions and provides an invite to all.

To some extent the weather dictates the atmosphere within this gallery due to the glass window. The feel of the space will change as the temperature and light changes on the outside, providing a variation within the space even during the same exhibition.

From the inside
From the outside

Exercise 2:3 Form and Light

Lighting and it’s intensity changed throughout the galleries due to light panels in the ceilings, the light could change with the weather or time of day, so often the atmosphere in the galleries would change without any man made intervention. The light panels could however be covered over – blocking out all natural light as was done in Galleries 1 & 2

Gallery 1 relied on artificial light, a little natural light would have worked it’s way through the glass door but it had no windows and it’s ceiling panels were covered. For me this felt harsh and likely another reason why this space did not feel so comfortable. The down facing strip lights however provided pleasant shadows on the floor and it’s directional spot lights illuminated exhibits and caused strong shadows on the walls. I noticed that peoples shadows did not appear to cover exhibits on the walls, which I thought was a clever aspect of the lighting design. The bright lights however bounced off the glass which to me felt glaring and although the temperature was pleasant within the room it provided me with a sense of coldness.

Soft shadows
Strong Shadow

The shapes and forms is Gallery 1 however contrasted with some of the feelings I had about this space. The curving tables and metal structure were fluid, provided pattern and movement within the space. The honeycombed structure of the metal sheeting was organic and softened the feelings of rigidity and exclusion that a solid barrier would suggest.

Gallery 2s exhibits were varied; gentle curved walls, round stone structures, angular glass cabinets, large fluid exhibits and pointy weird exhibits. A plethora of forms and shapes which deserved a range of lighting and which created an abundance of visual and emotional experiences.

Blocking out natural light in gallery 2 worked to provide the dark, moody, captivating experience in this space. The artificial light was kept dim providing soft low shadows on the floor. Directional light illuminated exhibits, which against the dark walls lured you in and made strong shadows providing an almost matching object, which furthered the sometimes menacing feeling this gallery presented.

Shadow and illumination

Gallery 3 had a mix of artificial and natural light. It’s ceiling panels were uncovered to allow in some light on what was a rather dull day. The room was well lit but had a softness, which felt gentle and calm. Spot lights accentuated works of art but not garishly, there seemed to be a subtlety in the directional lighting in this space.

I have already commented how at ease and free I felt to walk around this space, of which I am certain the lighting contributed to. Gallery 2 however was where I felt a a greater sense of freedom a space to breath and enjoy the expanse of height. Forms within the room were spaced to allow ease of movement and the large ceiling panel and huge window allowed the room to flood with natural light. This natural light I am sure eased tension providing feeling of openness and a sense of being at one with ones self.

Exercise 2:2 Touch, Smell and Emotions

In each of the galleries I stopped, closed my eyes and took deep breathes in to breath and smell the air. Strangely I could not note any smells in any of the galleries, not food, or materials, only the smell of scent which I brought with me from my own clothes.

The main surfaces throughout the galleries; walls, floors and ceilings are hard but I did not feel the space was cold and austere. Their qualities conveyed a different message.

The walls are a dominant structure within the building due to their width and height, they are covered in hard plaster but are lightly textured like watercolour paper, which provides a much softer appearance and did not make me feel they were an overpowering force. In the main the walls are void of colour, their whiteness allowing the exhibits to be the prominent features in the space and their mass to be compliant.

Hard wooden floors run throughout the galleries but when I took time to appreciate the floor I did not think of it as a hard stony material but quite the opposite, the honeyed coloured wood made me feel warm, its organic texture and pattern pleased me and I felt that it was a beautiful contrast against the white plain walls.

The fantastic ceilings come light instillation’s were made of a combination of materials. I could see metal painted beams on which the structure lay. The other materials may have been wood or MDF and the light panels I expect were perspex but may have been glass? There were also strip lights and spot lights attached. The design provided angles and depth and the natural light changed the colour and appearance of it’s textures.

I felt curious, welcomed and in awe of the main materials which I could see and sometimes touch in the gallery.

Moving through the galleries I was presented with different materials and feelings.

On first viewing I felt gallery 1 was hard and cold. The exhibits and additional structures in this gallery were mostly hard and the lack of additional sound effects made me feel vulnerable and exposed. Due to it being so quiet I felt that I had to be on my best behaviour or I would be told off. My sketching could be heard so I kept my head down trying not to be noticed.

Exposed

The seating in the gallery was made of hard plastic. Hard glass protected the exhibits on the display tables and hard metal structures provided division in the gallery. The more I visited the gallery the more I began to see and feel differently about the items within this gallery. The hard seating was bright pink and some plastic tables were a royal blue colour, adding pops of attractive colour. The glass display cabinets felt appealing due to their smooth, shiny, reflective surfaces and which viewers were permitted to touch. The metal sheets within the metal structures were not solid but honeycombed, allowing light and sound to flow through, and not as rigid and dense as I had first perceived.

Although I became aware of the more engaging elements within the space I was always left with a sense of exposure in this gallery. The low hum was slightly eerie and the lack of additional sound effects amplified every noise each individual made, where a cough felt like a little explosion or high heels felt like a horrible irritating tap on the side of your head.

Gallery 2 was a whole different experience. The change from white walls to deep blue and greens felt so inviting and cosy. The bright child like colours of one art work jarred with the luxuriousness of the blue and green but it also made me smile and appreciate the happy feelings these colours bring. There was numerous objects in this space all with different colours and textures and although I could not touch them I could sense them. I knew the furry objects would feel soft and inviting in my hard, the bamboo ladders would be smooth as well as bumpy, the weaved woolen object was bright and interesting and I would sense the roughness of its texture.

The cinema space had a lowered ceiling, soft seating and walls which were covered in fabric, which were tactile and comforting. I expect these were also to dampen the blasting music and sound effects which were coming from the film being shown but which still managed to emanate into the surrounding gallery. The sounds were a mix of music, effects of water, scrapping and a jet engine type effect. At times the sounds were very menacing and monstrous but were completely captivating. This space heightened every sense, I felt more aware and I felt completely comfortable in this space. In contrary to Gallery 1 felt the sound encapsulated me, protected me and allowed me to feel more free within the space. I felt like an entity that no one else could see. The diversity of colours, textures, objects and sound effects in this space really turned my senses on and I left this gallery with a sense of enthrallment.

 

Exercise 2:1 Soundscapes

Gallery 1 had no sound piped into the space, it was hollow, almost eerie. Its main sound was the hum of what I believed to be a ventilation system, which could not be seen. This was interrupted with soft soled shoes on the wooden floor, making a not unpleasant interruption in the quite hum. This was in contrast with the sudden sharp tap of high heeled shoes and coughs and sneezes which were amplified in the quiet enclosed space. The space was filled with mostly hard objects deflecting noises around the room.

Soundscape Gallery 1

For some the gallery would be a quiet contemplative place, a space to read the exhibition – which was mainly in the format of books, magazines, propaganda posters, newspaper and other articles. For me the lack of an encompassing sound made me feel vulnerable, felt strict, that I must remain quiet otherwise I would be noticed.

Gallery 2 was dominated with sounds from a film being shown, which had loud bellowing noises with sudden and disjointed layers of other sound effects added at different points. The effects were all loud but varied from being the pleasant sound of trickling water, to sharp scraping noises and the deafening roar of what sounded like a jet engine, to what I could imagine would be the thump of a heart beating with fear. The cinema room built within the gallery had soft cinema style seating, fabric on it’s temporary walls and lowered ceiling to help absorb the sound effects and prevent them from being amplified to an even greater extent through the larger space.

Soundscape Gallery 2

Gallery 3 & 4 are linked by a large opening in their joining wall so sounds flow through each gallery, increasing or decreasing in volume depending on position. At times the sounds were loud or very loud, others were quiet. Most were repeated with breaks between, apart from an instillation which included a water feature which was a constant not too loud and pleasant sound. If each sound was visible it would consist of a tribal African female chanting, a woman shouting and a large speaker reverberating with booming music. The stopping and starting and varying volumes of sound allowed for the natural sounds of the gallery to be present, those sounds that would be there regardless of the exhibition – movement, footsteps, chatter, children.

Soundscape Gallery 3 and 4


Contextual Study Point: Phenomenology

Considering the course work text on phenomenology and further reading which I undertook on the subject I reflected on my concept of phenomenology and how I analysed the space which I have been observing – Nottingham Contemporary.

When designing the galleries it is doubtless that phenomenology was taken into account. Architects and designers had to ensure a wide and varied public could engage with the space and allow its exhibitions to provide sensory and emotional experiences.

The space provided me with numerous changing experiences which I sensed or felt as I moved through the galleries. Considering phenomenology I realise that my perception of the space would not necessarily be the same as those I was sharing the space with, due to my own life experiences.

When visiting my chosen space again and taking phenomenology into consideration it heightened my senses, made me think why I took the path I did, why I sat in areas for longer, why I had a sense of pleasure at aspects within the building, all things that I might otherwise have taken for granted but which I would have subconsciously felt.

Throughout most of my visits I tried not to focus too much on the current exhibition but on the structure of the building. Reflecting on this I however I realised that so much of what I experienced was due to the phenomena of the exhibition itself – it’s sounds, it’s textures, the different lighting effects it required. So much so that individuals who are sensory impaired would still be able to feel, experience and sense the exhibition in their way.

There are many elements of the space which will remain; the walls, the ceiling, the floor, it’s large window but with each exhibition the phenomenology will be altered.


Exercise 1.4 Observing Behaviour

Routes through Nottingham Contemporary Galleries

The above diagram displays the many routes I observed whilst in the galleries. In gallery 2, 3, 4, there appeared to be a dominant route with viewers usually taking the room to the right. Within gallery 3 & 4 I don’t believe there was anything in particular that told viewers they must travel in this direction, so why did so many take to the right? Is it because we drive on the right, that many are right handed, was it the angled wall pulling viewers in that direction?

In gallery 2 however it did appear viewers were being guided to move to the right. This was partly due to the structures in the room and partly to allow viewers to take in everything the exhibition had to offer before being led to the exit and entrance of gallery 1.

Within gallery 1 I witnessed viewers take all kinds of routes. Perhaps because there was so much on offer, perhaps as some exhibits were articles with a lot of writing? For some this could be an attraction for others they come to view, to be given instant gratification and they may not have the time or inclination to read the small print. On a couple of instances I observed viewers enter, go straight to the video screens, put on the headphones, watch and listen for a short time then leave again without taking much notice of anything else in the space.

Within all galleries viewers tended to move slowly, taking in the art works. Viewers moved from art works on walls to exhibits on the floor, they peered in and stood back to look at a distance. Viewers tended to move with what appeared to be a mixture of ease and caution, casually taking their time but being careful not to get too close or touch the exhibits. Sometimes they held their hands to their face or tilted their heads to regard the piece and possibly reflect and when head phones went on to listen to and watch films there were giggles and smiles.

Movement and pace

The previous diagram displaying the routes taken in the gallery giving a feeling of the gallery being too busy and being manic and rushed. This was far from how it was. Generally the galleries were fairly quiet, people moved slowly and with freedom to move where they wanted in what order they wanted. The diagram below is a way of expressing the gentleness and freedom of movement and pace.

Exercise 1:3 Occupying Space

Observe and record my route through the space

My route through the galleries at Nottingham Contemporary
Observations through the galleries

Feelings and behaviors as I observed the space

Opening the large doors leading into Gallery 3 was a little like being Alice in Wonderland. The oversized door made me seem small in comparison. I also felt a sense of wonder as I walked through viewing the numerous large exhibits, wondering what each one is and means – and to the right a view directly into Gallery 4. The first few seconds on entering the room felt like decision time, which way do I go first? I was soon taken to looking up by the ceiling/light instillation, it’s depth, shapes and patterns had an impact on me so I spent some time looking up and analysing the ceiling before really spending time looking else where. I have always been attracted by pattern and symmetry so I felt a real pleasure that this ceiling/light instillation was an integral part of the building, and although it could be modified, would not change with exhibitions.

The angled walls and sharp corner in this gallery intrigued me. Interestingly I felt that I wanted to get right into the corner. Was this the aim, to pull me in, to make me feel I had to go in the direction of its point? I enjoyed this element of the building, I liked that it was out of the ordinary.

I tried to take a methodical route around the galleries but I don’t believe there had to be a method, although on one theme each instillation and series of art works spoke from themselves. With pieces around the walls as well as within the room I believe I could take any route I pleased, I did not feel restrained to one particular route.

On each of my visits I found I spent most time in Gallery 4. I felt like I could really breath here and also relax and spend time. On my second visit I was aware that this was due to increased ceiling height and the natural light which entered the gallery through the huge window and large roof panel. It seemed that when I walked into this gallery I opened my lungs and took a huge intake of breath, then relaxed and enjoyed being in the space. I was comfortable in this room, with it’s natural light, white walls, natural wooden floors and a place to sit and take time. It really felt that my body and mind was given the opportunity to de-stress.

To enter gallery 2 you must exit gallery 3 back into the foyer/reception area. when these spaces are hosting different exhibitions I can see that this works as a clear line of distinction. As all 4 galleries were utilised for the one exhibition it felt like an unwelcome break and I was a little annoyed that this barrier was in the way, rather than a doorway directly into the space.

Gallery 2 felt entirely different from 3 & 4. The white walls had gone, as had any natural light as the roof panels had been covered over. The room was painted in dark green and blue, which felt cosy, snug and almost luxurious but I also felt a sinister, menacing feeling. This was partly due to the music from the film which was being shown and the strange and curious instillation’s encased in the cavernous space. A doorway leads from gallery 2 directly into gallery 1; without thinking about it I walked around the space from wall to centre to wall again, taking in each piece until I naturally came to the doorway having taken everything in.

Through the doorway I was provided with another new experience. The space once again had the white angled walls, corners and bright light, although not natural light. This time there was no added sounds, only the hum of what I imagine was a ventilating systems. The art work in this space consisted mainly of magazine/paper articles and a lot of it. It was a smaller space in which there was a lot of tables displaying written material and banners hanging from the ceiling. I immediately did not feel as comfortable in this space as I had in the others. The hum felt like an acoustic void, which strangely made me feel like there was a lack of intimacy because I could hear what those who came to the gallery in pairs or groups were saying. The space between objects had also changed, now there was less space and so much information to look at. The space became over whelming and I no longer had that relaxed welcoming feeling that I had in the other galleries. Previously I had just thought the space and the layout of art works as somewhat unwelcoming. I have however considered the content of some of the articles on the walls, which were not all easy reading/viewing; an image of a dead women from an illegal abortion, articles about women’s battle for representation – perhaps I was not meant to feel at ease in this room, perhaps I was supposed to feel the tension and the lack of freedom.

Sound within the galleries had quiet and effect on me but it was not until I came into gallery 1 that I realised the positive effect the noise in the other galleries had. I felt like it cocooned me and allowed me my own little space where I could walk around, not having to hear what others were saying or hear noises from outside. The sounds in the other galleries were audio from films and music piped into the space as part of the exhibition. In gallery 2 a corner of the gallery had been set up like a small cinema; darkened, with seating and extremely loud music to a strange film full of close up images of parts of the body, eye balls and many other weird objects and substances. Sitting in this darkened space being blasted with loud music and large images really heightened my senses, suddenly I was aware of a pain which I had not thought about for a while and I also smelt a scent from my scarf which I hadn’t noticed before?

I believe this contemporary art space achieved its aim with its changing atmospheres which made me experience; security, pleasure, ease, edginess tension, being unsettled and awareness.